Thursday, March 06, 2008

Shalimar the clown

Shalimar had just an ambition in his life, to be the best, conquer the heights and be called a magnate. He focussed and concentrated on his aim mono maniacally and came out with flying colors from every adversity posted before him.But it all changed when he met her, Shalimar saw the world in different shades through her eyes - a pink shade, everything looked so beautiful to him.

The day they first met, not knowing each other, not wanting to know, not even a smile. Then they started with a blank smile. Then came "Hey, excuse me', then 'hi, hello' and all. They shared their days, hours and seconds. They made castles with their thoughts, moved mountains with their dreams.

Shalimar dreamed of a new life, new ambitions mushroomed out of his barren life. He enjoyed her company immensely and she was delighted by his anecdotes. They talked for hours daily, in fact communicated for hours through all mediums possible. He loved the feeling that a girl found him amusing, even interesting and she charmed him with her mellifluous giggles all the way through their chats.

Come Valentine's day and the cherub's arrows have long pierced Shalimar; he was all set to propose her. He was suddenly conscious of his filthy dress, his addled hair and his really dirty shoes. He bought a huge bunch of red roses for her, he revised and re-revised the plethora of romantic dialogues he snipped out of Mills and Moons. Finally Shalimar was ready for her.

He was an epitome of confidence when he marched into the cafe where they were going to meet. He must have waited for 10 minutes when he saw those luscious eyes looking for him. One look of her and Shalimar forgot all that he had mugged, lost all his confidence and settled down meekly before her, lost somewhere in her profound smile. They talked for sometime and he watched her heartily smile at all the cliche jokes he made. Finally with all the courage he could gain, he made his charge. He fell on his knees, offered her his bouquet to her and screamed with all his might "Marry me". The crowd around although disturbed by the obstreperousness, was unmindful as such jokers are common nowadays. She smiled at him, giggled, collected the bouquet from his outstretched hands and jokingly hit him on his head with it. Then she laughed at him and said "You are such a mandu". They settled down again and Shalimar with a pounding heart asked her "Can I take it as a yes". She stared at him for long time, her eyes dancing with wonder and finally asked "You mean you were serious" and she continued "You are crazy".

Shalimar rushed home after his "date" and opened his books. "This is where I belong" he thought and suddenly he felt very sad in his heart.

20 comments:

Rahul said...

dey! what is the source of inspiration here? Purely hypothetical, I hope!

Arjun Mohan said...

he he not purely hypothetical, certain experiences of the past inspired it :)......how is it ?

Rahul said...

different from your usual stuff. pretty good, I'd say :)

Anphy said...

old wine in new bottle, eh???

Arjun Mohan said...

Wines are tasty when they grow older ;)

Anphy said...

"Neither do men put new wine into old bottles: else the bottles break, and the wine runneth out, and the bottles perish: but they put new wine into new bottles, and both are preserved" says d bible :P

donald said...

yet another one !

Flyaway Mind said...

ahem..ahem..post valentine trajedies..let me assume 'no smoke without fire' :D hehehee... nice story.. shalimar should not be disheartened @ first attempt..

btw, u meant mills & boons..rt?

Arjun Mohan said...

Anphy,

That was a good concept of total preservation, I will keep that in mind in future ;)

Arjun Mohan said...

No more 4 me Devassy, I dont want any more :D had enough 4 a life time

Arjun Mohan said...

Rosh,

I meant mills and boons, was a mistake and I think Shalimar has given up after the abortive attempts :(

Confessions of a Born Procrastinator said...

hey man... nice work...

but the question is, why did Shaalimar give up so easily on his love?

Arjun Mohan said...

Thanks Rohit,

I think Shalimar knew that he is not good enough for his love ;) may b that is y.......not sure though, we will ask Shalimar himself :D

Confessions of a Born Procrastinator said...

he he...

Rohit believes, Shalimar is not good enough, if and only if Shalimar believes that he is not good enough!!!

Did i make sense??

Arjun Mohan said...

yah that makes lot of sense to me......let us try convincing Shalimar too b4 it is too late ;)

sajid said...
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sajid said...

goood post man..what if shalimar finally realised that she was not good enough for him...?..just a 'positive' way of looking at things...;)

Chellu said...

hehe..Different from ur other posts..Shalimar should go for another daate soon..[:P]

Arjun Mohan said...

thanks Sajid,

I hope he realizes that, any ways I always believe that "unreachable grapes are really sour" :)

Arjun Mohan said...

Thanks Bhadra,

I hope Shalimar does that soon, hope the new one doesn't end disastrously too :(